An infinitive is a verb with the word to in front of it. Splitting an infinitive means putting one or more words between to and the verb.
Infinitive Non-split infinitive Split infinitive
to run to run quickly to quickly run
to swim to swim eagerly to eagerly swim
to jump to jump determinedly to determinedly jump
WEAK:
It is usually better to not split infinitives.
BETTER:
It is usually better not to split infinitives.
It is okay to split an infinitive when you want to emphasize the word or words in between.
RIGHT:
I want you to study the material for the test.
MORE EMPHASIS:
I want you to thoroughly study the material for the test.
When you split an infinitive, be careful not to put too many words between to and the verb.
CONFUSING:
I want you to thoroughly and deliberately, without cutting any corners or making any excuses, study for the test.
BETTER:
I want you to thoroughly and deliberately study for the test without cutting any corners or making any excuses.
Is your voice active or passive?
Most writers and editors dislike the passive voice. They say it’s too blah.
PASSIVE VOICE:
The ball was hit. (By whom? The passive voice hides the doer of the action.)
ACTIVE VOICE:
Zhen hit the ball.
PASSIVE VOICE:
Cigarette taxes will be raised. (By whom?)
ACTIVE VOICE:
Congress will raise taxes on cigarettes.
PASSIVE VOICE:
My nose was punched by you. (At least we know who did it, but nobody talks this way.)
ACTIVE VOICE:
You punched me in the nose!
You can see from these examples that the passive voice is less dynamic than the active voice because it ignores or downplays the doer of the action. Imagine you are a sportswriter for your school paper. Which voice do you think your readers would find more interesting?
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Reprinted with permission from Painless Grammar. Copyright © 2011 by Rebecca Elliott. Published by Barron's Educational Series, Inc.