A work of nonfiction that dramatizes events, as it seems your book does, often takes some liberties. Conversations, for example, may not be recalled exactly, but are crafted in a way that stays true to the spirit of the exchange. Still, such a book has an obligation to fact and a responsibility to be clear where the facts end and the author’s contribution takes over.
Maria Flook’s Invisible Eden: A Story of Love and Murder on Cape Cod is a work of nonfiction that tells the true story of the murder of Christa Worthington. Flook inserts herself into the narrative as a character as she interviews and investigates. Though Flook never met Worthington, she contemplates her life and imagines her way into Worthington’s sensory experience and some of her private moments. The book conveys fact and goes deeper into the possibilities surrounding what remains unknown through the use of imagination, conclusion, and speculation—and the distinctions are clear. The reader is an informed party; the narrative details Flook’s sources as she encounters them, processes what she learns, and plans her next moves.
Sometimes there’s a conflict between the demands of dramatization and the available facts. David Eggers ran into this with What Is the What?, a novel based on the life of Sudanese “Lost Boy” Valentino Achak Deng. In an interview on NPR’s All Things Considered, Eggers said he and Deng “set out to write a purely nonfictional book but it was really restricting.” Deng was young when the events took place and that left significant gaps that Eggers needed to fill with additional personal accounts, research, and his own imagination. In a preface to the novel, Deng describes the lengthy collaboration and weighs in on the result: “The book is historically accurate, and the world I have known is not different from the one depicted within these pages.”
In sharing a real person’s thoughts, feelings and motivations, the author must first know them. And the only way to truly know them is to have some sort of access to that person’s inner world. This might happen in honest, candid interviews or perhaps from entries in a detailed personal journal. This was not true for Flook—she did not know Christa Worthington—so she generally made imagined moments and speculation clear. Eggers did have access, based on close collaboration with Deng, the subject of the book, yet there was still enough invention to warrant the label of fiction. As you consider your own work, take into account how much of your analysis and interpretation you are bringing to it. Are you making subjective conclusions based on evidence such as facial expressions, comments under oath, and actions? Or have you learned, directly from the source, about that person’s inner experience? These are very different kinds of information—and it’s important clarify to the reader what kind they’re getting.